Story Update: Forging the Blade, Kithe and Kin, Chapter 6, 3/3

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      Forging the Blade, Part II - Kithe and Kin
      by MacGeorge
      
      Rating, PG-13
      
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      See disclaimers and acknowledgments in previously posted
      Part 0.
      
      
      Chapter 6
      
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      Connor concentrated on Duncan’s efforts on sword drills and
      spars, and the winter sped by with few incidents that caused
      real concern.  In the early spring, Duncan caught the eye of
      a local noblemen's wife, and her not-particularly subtle
      invitation to Connor "and house guest" to a lavish dinner
      and ball were an impetus for Duncan to finally wear the
      clothes Giuseppe had ordered for him.  But even the prospect
      of an evening of women fawning over him was not sufficient
      to overcome his disgust at the vivid blue silk jacket and
      pantaloons, with slashes opened to show gold satin
      underneath, matching the intricate braiding on the high
      collar and sleeves.
      
      "Och, I canna' walk in these things," Duncan complained,
      stepping bowlegged around the room while Giuseppe giggled in
      delight.
      
      "You'll get used to it," Connor assured him, as Giuseppe
      stopped staring at Duncan long enough to help him into his
      own, far more conservative burgundy and black damask
      jacket.  "At least you won't have to wear a wig."
      
      "A wig!  You canna' be serious!"
      
      But the valet had pulled a long, chestnut-colored wig out to
      fit tightly on Connor's head.  It weighed a ton, and before
      the evening was out, Connor was certain he would sweat clear
      through the damn thing.
      
      "Well," Duncan gave him a long, appraising look.  "Don't you
      look the right gentleman?"
      
      Connor turned in a circle, knowing he cut a pretty
      impressive figure as Giuseppe busily brushed imperceptible
      dust and lint from his clothes.
      
      But Duncan, standing there with a hand on one hip, his
      luxuriously, naturally curled hair tumbling down the front
      of the brilliant blue coat, looked every inch a prince, and
      was amusingly oblivious to it.  The impression held - until
      Duncan walked across the room.
      
      "No, no, just walk naturally, Duncan.  You look like a
      sailor without his land legs!"
      
      "But these damned pantaloons feel funny," Duncan complained,
      bending down to awkwardly pluck at the excess material
      between his thighs.
      
      "No, no, signore Duncan," Giuseppe insisted.  "Like so!"
      With one hand in the air, and one on his hip, he pranced
      gracefully across the room.
      
      "Not bloody likely!" Duncan growled.  He grabbed his sword
      in disgust and slid it into his scabbard, preparing to
      leave.
      
      "No, wait, Duncan," Connor advised, going to his dresser and
      opening the door.  He pulled out a rapier with an
      intricately worked quillion guard.  With it was a lovely
      engraved scabbard, held by a black velvet sash, edged with
      gold braid that just happened to match the braid on Duncan's
      new suit of clothes.  He turned and handed it to his
      student.  "This is far more suited to a social affair, and
      that giant claymore of yours will just scare the guests."
      
      Duncan's eyes grew wide as he pulled the blade free, turning
      it and watching it gleam in the bright sunlight from the
      tall windows.  "Oh, Connor, it...it's beautiful, but I can't
      accept this."
      
      "Yes, you can.  It is time you learned to use a variety of
      blades, anyway.  That heavy claymore is not the best for
      close quarters fighting."
      
      Duncan cut the rapier through the air with a smile.  "It
      feels like almost nothing in my hand, though.  My claymore
      would slice right through it."
      
      "You'd be surprised, Duncan, what any good blade can do in
      the hands of one who knows how to wield it."
      
      "Mmm," Duncan said dubiously.  "Well, 'tis a pretty thing,
      regardless."
      
      Connor laughed, then took the scabbard, settling the velvet
      sash over Duncan's shoulder while Giuseppe applauded in
      delight.  "It's a gentleman's weapon, Duncan.  And tonight,
      at least, you are to look every inch the gentleman."
      
      Duncan frowned and "harrumphed", but nonetheless, suddenly
      his walk lost its bowlegged straddle, and he had a prideful
      tilt to his head that would have done any princeling proud.
      
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      Their cloaks were taken by liveried servants, and Duncan
      stayed one pace behind as Connor stepped into the glittering
      ballroom and the smell of bodies and perfume and food
      assaulted them.  And at a distance, something else.
      
      It shouldn't have been a surprise.  Immortals of any serious
      age tended to easily tread the halls of money and power, but
      Connor's hand automatically found its way to the hilt of his
      sword, resting there as though the gesture was perfectly
      natural.
      
      "Connor, do you...?" Duncan stopped his question at Connor's
      raised hand.
      
      "Whoever it is, they are not likely to make a challenge in
      this crowd.  Just don't wander off," Connor instructed.
      Then when Duncan turned, studying the glitteringly attired
      crowd, his hand on his blade, Connor took a firm grip on his
      student's arm. "I mean it, Duncan.  You go out to take a
      piss, you tell me about it," Connor demanded.
      
      "All right, all right," Duncan frowned, pulling his arm
      away, but then smiled as the Contessa di Montecini sailed up
      to them in a brilliant red gown trimmed in black at a tight
      'vee' waistline, with stiffened gilt lace forming a high
      collar that framed a bold display of décolletage.  Her
      glossy black hair was piled high in tight curls, with a few
      stray strands left to drift tantalizingly at her temples and
      long, white neck.
      
      "Ah, Signore MacLeod," she said to Connor.  "What a pleasure
      it is to have you here," she said in Italian, offering her
      hand for him to bow over.  "And you brought your charming
      cousin," she added conspiratorially.  "All the ladies have
      been asking about the handsome new cavalieri."
      
      As the Contessa's gaze traveled over him, Duncan clearly
      understood enough of her words and her body language to get
      the general trend of the conversation, and he smoothly
      stepped forward and bowed over her hand with an openly
      flirtatious smile.
      
      "È un onore incontrare tale bella signora," he said softly.
      
      The Contessa, who had to have been used to such flattery,
      still blushed and fluttered her fan under the force of
      Duncan's charm.
      
      "I didn't realize you spoke our language, Signore," she
      replied in Italian.
      
      Duncan cocked his head and smiled quizzically at Connor,
      which made him laugh.
      
      "Ah, but he has only learned a little Italian yet," Connor
      explained.
      
      "Well," the Contessa sighed with a glittering smile, firmly
      taking Duncan's arm, "He certainly seems to have learned the
      most important phrases."
      
      Connor wasn't entirely sure whether Duncan was at greater
      risk in the Contessa's clutches, or from an encounter with
      an unknown Immortal, but he decided he had best find out who
      else was there among their Race.  Hopefully, it was no one
      interested in a confrontation, but you could never be
      certain.  He left Duncan in the firm grip of the Contessa,
      and wandered around the perimeter of the large ballroom,
      smiling and nodding at faces that had become familiar during
      the decade he had lived in the city.  He kept getting
      annoying brushes of Presence, but couldn't be sure whether
      it was Duncan or someone else, or even more than one other.
      
      He paused at a cluster of local landowners, discussed the
      weather, the last grape crop, the ever-bubbling local
      gossip, and ended up dancing with the daughter of a
      prosperous local vintner.  The floor was crowded with
      couples as the large string ensemble played a lively tune
      underneath the warm, sparkling light of enormous crystal
      chandeliers lit with hundreds of candles.  The stately moves
      of the dance allowed for many flirtatious looks and
      conversations, and Connor spotted Duncan on the dance floor
      with the Contessa as he made a mistake in the pattern.  From
      the rapt, amused look on his partner’s face, Duncan's
      ignorance was considered charming.
      
      Connor remembered his own clumsy first efforts at court
      dancing, when he managed to trample his partner's dainty
      silk shoes. He had ultimately hired an instructor so as not
      to publicly embarrass himself again.  How his student
      managed to turn a liability into a flirtatious asset was a
      mystery and an irritation.
      
      The evening had blended into night before Connor finally
      found the mysterious immortal in the large crowd and the
      sizeable estate, and only after he spotted Duncan standing
      on one of many outdoor balconies with Wilhelm Munter and
      another man.  He could see the tension in Duncan's shoulders
      from across the room, and as soon as he could, he excused
      himself from his latest dance partner.
      
      As he approached, Duncan stepped close to the stranger next
      to Munter, deliberately invading his space, and Munter
      placed a hand on Duncan's shoulder.
      
      "Something wrong, Duncan?" Connor asked, masking his concern
      with a friendly smile.
      
      "This Sassenach said he heard that Juan Sanchez Villalobos
      Ramirez was a fool and a sodomite," Duncan growled.
      
      Ah, so that was the source of all the dissonance rattling
      around in Connor's brain.  Four immortals in the same room.
      Connor couldn't ever remember seeing so many in the same
      place.  No wonder the tension in the air was palpable.
      
      “Really?” Connor stepped forward, crowding Duncan away from
      the stranger, while surreptitiously clamping his hand on
      Duncan’s, where it had closed over the hilt of his new
      rapier.  “You knew Ramirez, then? And you are…?”
      
      The man was almost Connor’s height, pale skinned, with
      striking dark blue eyes.  He wore a wig of powdered white,
      so Connor couldn’t tell much more about him, other than he
      had expensive tastes in clothes.  His coat was of
      beautifully embroidered silk from Cathay, displaying
      intricately interweaving vines and colorful flowers that
      would have taken months of work to complete.
      
      “Edmund Henry Dunningham, at your service, sir,” the man
      replied in a carefully cultivated upper-class British
      accent.  “And I only repeat what I was told by no less than
      Grayson himself.”
      
      Munter ostentatiously cleared his throat and Connor saw
      Dunningham send the German an irritated glance before he
      backed off slightly from a near-physical confrontation with
      the two MacLeods.  Connor looked over to Munter, with an
      expectant, curious stare.  “Please excuse Edmund’s
      rudeness.  He has strong opinions on many subjects,” Munter
      said by way of explanation.  “As a student, it…complicated
      the teaching process,” he added with a wry twist of his
      mouth.
      
      Connor was beginning to believe that Duncan’s instincts
      about Munter might have been correct.  “Aye, I can well
      understand the problem,” he agreed.
      
      “But eventually, the student is no longer a student, eh,
      Wilhelm?” Dunningham asked with a tight, cold smile.  “At
      least for some of us,” he added, glancing disdainfully at
      Duncan.  Connor could feel Duncan lean forward, and willed
      the man to stillness with a hard look.
      
      “Only a fool decides he has nothing left to learn,” Wilhelm
      replied with an equally frosty tone even before Connor could
      form his own response.
      
      “Old styles and methods must give way to new ideas,”
      Dunningham snapped back.  “This Game of ours,” he waved a
      hand languidly, “all those rules we’re supposed to follow,
      what use are they in an era when a flintlock can cut a man
      down at 20 paces before he comes within a swordarm’s
      length?”
      
      “If we abandon honor, we are nothing more than murderers,”
      Duncan snapped.  “And there is no true value to anything
      gained in such a manner.”
      
      “Oh, ho!” Dunningham laughed, placing his hand on his
      chest.  “Touché!” Then, in an aside to Munter intended to be
      heard by both MacLeods, “Imagine a Scotsman extolling the
      virtues of gentlemanly combat.”
      
      “Be careful, boy,” Connor said softly, moving close enough
      to almost whisper in the Englishman’s ear.  “I have no
      desire to taste the sour Quickening of such a wee Sassenach
      as yourself, but I’ll be happy to put a few slices in that
      lovely jacket of yours, just to teach you some manners.”  He
      caught Dunningham’s eyes for a moment and saw them flicker
      from arrogance to fear before they shifted away entirely.
      “And Grayson would no more confide in you than he would to a
      mongrel dog,” he added softly.
      
      Connor felt a hand on his shoulder, and looked over to see
      Munter giving him a hard-eyed stare.  “Take care, Connor
      MacLeod,” Munter said softly.  “He may be an arrogant fool,
      but he was my student, and I’ll not have you taking his head
      while I’m around to defend it.”
      
      “I don’t need you to protect me!” Dunningham snapped at his
      former teacher, then glared at Duncan and Connor before he
      turned on his heel and disappeared into the crowd.
      
      “Connor,” Duncan began, but they were interrupted by the
      Contessa, come to claim Duncan to teach him more of the
      finer art of courtly dancing.  All three men immediately
      dropped their overt hostility.
      
      “And you’ve met the charming Baron Wilhelm!” the Contessa
      observed.  “How delightful.  I’m sure you have much to
      discuss.  Signore MacLeod has been a most knowledgeable and
      successful trader of some of the finest goods from all over
      the world, and I understand you, my dear Baron, have some
      stunning horses that I absolutely must see.”
      
      “Indeed, Madame La Contessa,” he smiled graciously and gave
      a courtly bow.  “I have a beautiful mare who would make an
      excellent mount for a fine horsewoman such as yourself.”
      
      “Ah, you flatter me, Baron, but perhaps we can ride together
      sometime, yes?” she fluttered her eyelashes at the German
      before pulling Duncan back onto the dance floor.
      
      “I take it manners was not among the subjects you sought to
      teach young Mr. Dunningham,” Connor said evenly once the
      Contessa was out of earshot.
      
      Munter sighed, rubbing a temple with one hand.  “The
      obligation to teach new Immortals when we stumble across
      them can truly test a man’s patience.  I’ve had precious few
      students like your Duncan, someone who is intelligent,
      curious and eager for knowledge, but who is also someone of
      honor.  Most have been more like Dunningham – obsessed with
      this new gift they’ve been given and eager mostly to exploit
      it at the expense of anyone who crosses their path.”
      
      Munter’s words struck Connor as odd.  “You just…stumble
      across your students?” he asked.
      
      “Well, of course,” he answered, his brow furrowing
      curiously.  “How else?  I certainly wouldn’t go looking for
      one.  I found Dunningham when he got his skull crushed in a
      bar brawl in London, and they dumped his body out into the
      alley.  If I hadn’t been crossing the street when he first
      woke up, I would never have known he was there, and there
      are days when I wish I had just kept walking.”  The two men
      moved further out onto the balcony where the air was
      cooler.  “I’ve had three other students, one of whom was a
      young servant to a woman I was keeping as a mistress.  I
      knew she was going to be an Immortal, of course, so when I
      heard from Caroline, my lady friend, that Abigail had taken
      a terrible fall, but hadn’t seemed harmed at all, I knew
      what had happened.  I tried to tell her what she was, showed
      her that we could get cut and heal, but she just kept
      screaming that I was the devil.”  Munter shook his head
      sadly.  “It was such a complete balls up.  Caroline was
      jealous that I was suddenly paying attention to her maid,
      and Abigail was scared out of her mind.  I finally stuck her
      in a convent in France and have no idea what has happened to
      her since.  That was almost 200 years ago.”
      
      “And the others?” Connor asked.
      
      Munter shrugged.  “Both ignorant young scamps that I
      stumbled across.  One had been stoned by his village as a
      devil, the other was a thief who had been hung for his
      crimes.  I tried.  I really tried to teach them that being
      Immortal was about more than getting away with crimes for
      which they might otherwise have been killed.  Both learned
      some rudimentary sword skills, then ran away when I tried to
      instill some real discipline or education in them.  Neither
      of them survived a decade.”  Munter looked over at Connor.
      “You are really quite lucky, you know.  Duncan is a fine
      man.  I suspect he will mature into a real contender for the
      Prize, and someone who actually might be worthy of it.”
      
      Connor chuckled, remembering Duncan’s vow to be the very
      best, learn from the very best.  “I think you may be right.”
      
      “How did you find him?” Munter asked.
      
      Connor cleared his throat, his hands clasped behind his back
      as he looked up into the night sky, where the moon hung
      heavy and fat, high above them.  “You might not believe me,”
      he said softly, wondering if he even believed it himself.
      
      “Really?  Try me.”
      
      “I dreamt of him.  Was driven all the way across the
      Continent by nightmare after nightmare, pushing me to find
      someone who desperately needed me.  And I found a clansman
      who had been exiled from his home and family, as I had
      been.  He had been living on the edge of starvation and
      despair for three years, thought himself a demon, and was
      prepared to die over and over again in defense of a cause he
      believed just, just to prove otherwise.”
      
      Munter was silent for a moment, gazing with Connor at the
      stars.  “You’ve given me chills, Connor MacLeod.  A strong
      portent, indeed.  Does it mean the Gathering is near, at
      last?”
      
      “I don’t know what it means, except that I have found a
      kinsman, a brother, when I had thought my family long dead,”
      Connor replied in a near whisper, then he shook his head.
      What was he thinking, confiding in a near stranger, much
      less another Immortal, like this?  He stiffened when Munter
      put a hand on his arm.
      
      “MacLeod,” Munter said, then stilled when he saw the cold
      look in Connor’s eye.  “I…I just wanted to ask you not to
      take on Dunningham, if you can avoid it.  He has a lot to
      learn, and while he no longer considers himself my student,
      he is far from ready to take on a seasoned Immortal.  Give
      him a chance to become a better man.”
      
      “I do not hunt, Munter.  But I do not run from a
      challenge.”  Connor held Munter’s pleading gaze for a
      moment, then relented a little.  “But if your Mr. Dunningham
      is so bold as to challenge me, I’ll try to teach him that it
      was a bad choice, without taking his head.”
      
      Munter smiled gratefully.  “Duncan is a lucky man, Connor
      MacLeod,” he said, then bowed, clicking his heels together.
      “Until we meet again, then.”
      
      “Until we meet again,” Connor replied, and watched as Munter
      slipped through the crowd, probably off to find his
      ex-student to try to keep him out of trouble.
      
      Speaking of which, Connor moved inside, scanning the room
      for his own errant student, finding him at last in a circle
      of women, blushing furiously as he struggled to answer
      dozens of questions in his limited Italian.  When Connor
      approached, Duncan sent him a look of desperation, so Connor
      waded in and was, himself, immediately the target of a
      babble of female attention.
      
      The rest of the evening went by in a blur of dancing and
      laughter and Connor had the best time he could remember in
      years.  The women were abundant and attentive, the music was
      lilting and lively, and he had Duncan to watch his back and
      with whom to share the evening’s memories.
      
      It was almost dawn by the time they stumbled into their
      carriage, with both of them recipients of numerous notes and
      whispered promises for future rendezvous.  Duncan sighed and
      leaned back, then chuckled, reaching across to slap Connor
      on the leg.  “And where did you and that young woman in the
      blue ball gown disappear to for so long?” he insisted with a
      grin.
      
      “She just needed some air,” Connor replied, trying to keep a
      straight face as the carriage lurched over the cobblestones.
      
      “Oh, and you supplied it, no doubt!” Duncan laughed.
      
      “Well,” Connor shrugged, his lips beginning to betray him
      with an uncontrolled twitch of a smile.  “I always try to
      accommodate a lady.  But at least I generally stuck to one
      at a time.  Lord, Duncan, the men were beginning to talk
      about lynching you if you monopolized any more of them.”
      
      “They all just wanted to help me learn to dance,” Duncan
      smiled, looking insufferably pleased with himself.  “And
      sometimes, I can be a very slow learner,” he added with an
      evil glint in his eye, “and hands-on teaching is required.”
      
      “So I noticed,” Connor observed with a raised eyebrow.  “As
      a matter of fact, I’m sure I can think of some hands-on
      training we can do.  There is a little exercise Nagano
      taught me called ‘slapping sand’.  It is very useful in
      hardening yourself against extreme pain and exhaustion.”
      
      The grin on Duncan’s face quickly evolved to mild panic when
      he saw the malicious look of anticipation on Connor’s face.
      
      Sometimes it was good to be the teacher.
      
      
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      to be continued...
      
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