FICTION: MERCILESS 7/8

      Bridget Mintz Testa (btesta@HOUSTON.RR.COM)
      Thu, 4 Jul 2002 20:44:22 -0500

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      Merciless 7: Elena and the Tiger
      
      Vi Moreau and Suzanne Herring
      Write the authors c/o Bridget Mintz Testa, btesta@houston.rr.com.
      RATING: PG-15 for language and one sexually-suggestive scene
      
      Rainforest of Northern Malaysia
      November 2008
      
      Elena Duran stared into the tiger's green, intelligent, merciless
      eyes, trying very hard not to move, but it was a lost cause.  She
      could feel the tremors overtaking her aching muscles as the fever
      burned its way even through her Immortal constitution.  The left side
      of her belly felt swollen and so tender she didn't think she could
      stand up straight, and the pain in her shoulder was sharp and recent.
      For a few days now she'd known she was being stalked by a large
      animal, and here he was in the flesh.  And bone.  And muscle, claws,
      sharp teeth.  A damn fucking tiger!  God, he was big!  [!Carajo!]
      
      Elena had moved from her tent on the ground up into the crotch of a
      tree, making an uncomfortable makeshift bed from her blanket and some
      leaves and grass, but at some point in her feverish thrashings she'd
      fallen out of her perch and landed hard, twisting something in her
      shoulder.  Lying semi-conscious on the bare ground, shivering, she'd
      heard a noise and risen to one knee, grabbing for her sword.  That
      was the position she was in now.  She remembered reading that tigers
      were night predators and attacked only from ambush, from behind, but
      it was still light enough that she could very clearly see this
      animal, who looked old and half-starved, but was still big and strong
      enough to rip her apart.  He crouched a mere five meters away from
      her, trying to decide whether to have himself an easy, early dinner.
      
      What the hell was that sound, like a motor running?  Oh God, it was a
      growl, deep in that massive striped chest just between huge clawed
      feet and a head the size of her torso--and now he was baring his
      teeth, not teeth, fangs that were going to pierce the back of her
      neck and break it while his claws tore into her soft belly and
      eviscerated her so he could eat her intestines or her liver or ...
      Elena had not been brain-dead enough to enter a jungle unprepared,
      but her rifle was up in the tree, completely unaccessible.  If she
      hadn't run out of food and spent the last two days eating grubs and
      drinking rain water; if she weren't wet to the bone, bitten by every
      insect in the tropics and had forgotten what soap felt like; if she
      weren't suffering, again, from malaria -- Maybe I'm hallucinating.
      Maybe this tiger isn't real.  Maybe I'm home in bed in Argentina and
      having a bad dream.  Maybe I'm not real.
      
      No.  She could see the darkening trees, hear the jungle noises, smell
      the tiger.  Hell, she could smell herself: the hot sweat from the
      fever and the cold sweat of fear, and surely the big cat, who was
      even now settling into his haunches, ready to spring, could smell her
      too.
      
      She tensed, waiting for the leap, hoping she could get her sharp
      blade between the cat and herself.  But really, wouldn't the tiger be
      doing her a favor, putting her out of her misery?  How badly did she
      want to live anyway?  That was easy--long enough to kill the bastard
      she was hunting, Hartmann.  Long enough to decapitate the son of a
      bitch who had removed from this world a totally defenseless and
      beautiful creature whose only sin had been to trust him.  Maria Feliz
      Betancourt was a Mexican Immortal who for the last two centuries had
      slept with every man she could, and she preferred Immortal men.  "One
      day one of them is going to kill you," Elena had warned her friend.
      "No.  I'm too good in bed," Maria Feliz had answered, her eyes
      sparkling.  "They'd rather screw me than kill me."  Well this
      Hartmann had screwed her, killed her, then robbed her, and he was
      going to pay and he couldn't hide in that Buddhist temple forever!
      
      "You can't hide on Holy Ground forever!" she yelled into the forest
      that had been her home for over two weeks now.  Her outburst startled
      the tiger, who shook his massive head, then snarled and spit at her.
      She remembered you were not supposed to look dangerous canines in the
      eye, but what about felines?  Should she pretend submission or get to
      her feet and charge at him?  Yeah -- like she could even stand!
      
      Suddenly she felt extremely faint; her grip slipped from the hilt,
      and her blade fell to the jungle floor with a thud, no doubt
      disturbing more insects which would bite her tonight.  She fell
      forward onto hands and knees, her head up, still watching the big cat
      and even more terrified.  [!Ayudame, Dios mio!] she prayed as the
      tiger growled once more then mercifully melted back into the trees.
      For long moments Elena waited, panting, straining to see in the
      coming darkness or hear over the pounding of her heart or smell if he
      was coming back, from behind?  But she was a sitting duck here, so
      when she felt a smidgin stronger, she put her sword back into the
      scabbard, crawled to the foot of her tree and slowly, laboriously
      muscled her way up, collapsing in a completely exhausted heap.  The
      last thing Elena wondered before passing out was if tigers could
      climb trees.
      
      When she awoke the next morning the tiger had not climbed the tree in
      the night, although she could see a rather large snake -- a
      constrictor, by the width of it -- too near for comfort.  She hoped
      she was too big for the snake to eat.  She felt a little better, and
      decided to risk going down to heat up some water for coffee, stirring
      in the last bit of her powdered milk, and never mind that the ants
      had gotten into it.  More protein, she thought to herself.  She felt
      cooler, which meant the fever had gone down, which meant she was
      finally beating back the malaria and could get back to the business
      of hunting Hartmann.  But she was tired of waiting for that fucking
      Austrian.  She had tracked him for nearly four months, from Mexico to
      Brasil across to Africa, Nigeria, the Sudan, and now here.  It was a
      quest for her, made easier by Hartmann's choice of venue.  He should
      have gone north, to the fiords and mountains, instead of south to
      Africa and Asia, where tracking a tall, blond blue eyed male required
      only money, time and persistence.  Four months, and he had finally
      holed up in the most unlikely place, a small Buddhist temple set
      apart from a tiny village, both deep in the jungles of Malaysia.
      
      "You can't touch me, you bitch!" he'd yelled out at her from inside.
      And she'd waited him out in the jungle, her sword always in its
      scabbard at her waist.  The temple was just far enough from the
      village that she couldn't stay there and still sense him.  But she
      was tired of eating rodents and snakes and grubs -- often raw, as it
      was generally too wet to build a fire -- and sweating out first
      dysentery, then malaria, and now dodging tigers and ever-bigger
      snakes.  The waiting was over.  Today -- no, tomorrow when she felt
      stronger -- Hartmann would die, or she would.
      
      As the day passed, she felt stronger.  She found some fruit which
      didn't taste too bad, and she'd become an expert at finding insects.
      She even managed to catch a lizard that, even raw, made good eating
      when washed down with collected rainwater.  It was an hour before
      dark and she was just getting ready to climb her tree for the night
      when she made a horrible realization.  She couldn't sense him.  She
      couldn't sense Hartmann.  How long had it been since she'd paid
      attention?  If she couldn't sense him, that meant --
      
      "No, not again, not this time!" she yelled as she picked up her rifle
      and ran through the trees, heedless of catching branches and tripping
      roots, up the broad stone steps of the temple, banging on the metal
      doors.  No, he couldn't be gone, he couldn't ...
      
      After an interminable wait the door was opened by the same small,
      ochre-robed Buddhist monk she had seen two weeks before, the one who
      had not allowed her inside, undoubtedly because Hartmann had told him
      she was trying to kill the Austrian.  Which she had been, and still
      was.
      
      "Hartmann?" she asked him again.
      
      He stared into her eyes peacefully, his gaze going to the sword
      hanging from her waist and to the rifle clutched in her hand.
      
      She ignored his silent condemnation.  "Where is Hartmann?" she asked,
      knowing he understood what she meant.
      
      For an answer he waited, then pointed toward the jungle.  Hell, at
      least it gave her a direction.  Kind of.  Maybe.
      
      "When?" she asked.  "When did Hartmann go?" she said, pointing to her
      watch, belatedly noting that the man wore no watch and probably never
      had, and never would.
      
      No answer, no indication.  With a curse, Elena turned and plunged
      into the jungle.  The best and easiest way to get out there was the
      same way they'd come, on the river, so she headed in that direction,
      satisfied that she'd scuttled his boat and hoping he wouldn't locate
      hers.  Finding his trail was easy.  The man was not really at home in
      the wild, and she could only speculate that he'd come to such a
      remote place hoping she wouldn't follow.  A miscalculation on his
      part, as she was still following, reading his recent tracks and
      trying to sniff him out, like a predator smelling for her prey, and
      within minutes she sensed the Immortal.  The scum.
      
      Enraged and still feeling sick, Elena rushed into a small clearing to
      find Hartmann sprawled on the ground.  He turned to face her, an
      animal at bay, rising to his knees, and she could see how gaunt he
      looked, how much weight he'd lost.  She probably looked as badly as
      he did.  He was disheveled, with torn filthy clothes, dirty matted
      hair, and several days growth of golden beard on his chin, and there
      was no hope left in his eyes.  And mostly -- he was afraid.  She
      could smell his fear, even over the smells of the jungle and their
      stinking bodies.
      
      "Why?" he asked her in Spanish.  "Why can't you just leave me alone!?"
      
      "Where's your sword?" she growled impatiently, seeing that he didn't
      have it.  She was so exhausted or sick that she was seeing double,
      but she was determined to finish this.  "Do you think after what you
      did that I won't kill you if you're unarmed?"
      
      "What was Maria Feliz to you?  Your student?  Your teacher?  Your
      lover!?" he snarled.
      
      His defiance gave her strength.  Elena swallowed, her face grim as
      she drew her sword.  "She was my friend," Elena whispered.
      
      "Then join her in hell!" he yelled.
      
      Elena's eyes grew with wonder as she noticed two simultaneous things.
      Hartmann -- fuck him! -- was pulling a gun out of his pocket, and
      something big had just emerged out of the trees behind him.  The
      tiger pounced on the kneeling man from behind just as Hartmann fired,
      the bullet striking Elena in the left side of the head.  She screamed
      and dropped like a stone, trying to hold onto her sword.  She heard
      Hartmann's agonized screams just as she passed into
      semi-consciousness.
      
      It was still twilight when she opened her eyes, her head already
      clearing a bit, hearing ... it was the noise made by a large animal
      eating.
      
      The tiger noticed her movement and turned to her, snarling his
      displeasure and his challenge.  Elena was frozen with horror at the
      sight of the big cat's gore-covered mouth and nose, great gobs of
      what looked like Hartmann's intestines dripping from the tiger's
      fangs.  And the sounds Hartmann was making!  Oh, God -- the tiger was
      eating Hartmann alive!  As much as she'd seen death and bloodletting,
      she felt her skin crawl and she wanted to vomit.  She couldn't see
      the rest of the Austrian clearly, and the cat abruptly leaned down
      savagely, breaking off Hartmann's horrible cries.  In another moment
      the tiger had picked up his limp prey in his jaws and laboriously
      carried the man off into the growing darkness of the trees.  It never
      occurred to her to follow, to make sure Hartmann's head was separated
      from his body; she didn't really want to see any more.  All she could
      think of suddenly was getting to the safety of Holy Ground.  She
      stood shakily, wiping the blood from her eyes.  It took her two tries
      to get her sword back into her scabbard, and she began to stumble
      back in what she hoped was the direction of the temple.  But she
      hadn't gotten too far when she felt the electricity in the air, and
      she knew she wasn't going to be able to get out of range in time.
      OH, NO!
      
      She could hear the tiger roaring and she thought: Serves you right
      for biting his head off, you stupid, flea-bitten --  And at that
      moment all thought stopped as Hartmann's Quickening, which had
      searched her out and stalked her just like the tiger had, blasted her
      from behind with some pleasure and a lot of pain
      
        but the worst thing was living in Hartmann's mind those last few
      minutes -- she could feel in her own body the tiger tearing into her
      belly, ripping out her insides, his jaws just a few centimeters above
      her, dripping with her life's blood.  "God, please make it stop!"
      Elena sobbed, helpless to do anything but relive Hartmann's agony.
      She lay trembling until she finally felt free of Hartmann, until he
      was gone, then she pulled herself back up to her feet and laboriously
      made her way back to the temple, crawling up the steps and collapsing
      just outside the ornately carved double doors.  I'm going to die
      here, right outside Holy Ground, she thought as she heard the
      triumphant roar of the big cat echoing through the jungle night, and
      the last thing she saw before she passed out were the outstretched
      arms of the Buddhist monk.
      
      
      Translations:
      !carajo! (Spanish) - dammit
      ayudame, Dios mio (Spanish) - help me, God
      
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