FICTION: MERCILESS 5/8

      Bridget Mintz Testa (btesta@HOUSTON.RR.COM)
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      Merciless 5: Threats at a Funeral
      
      
      Vi Moreau and Suzanne Herring
      Write the authors c/o Bridget Mintz Testa, btesta@houston.rr.com.
      RATING: PG-15 for language and one sexually-suggestive scene
      
      Special thanks to Michelle Wolfe for collaborating with us on this
      section with her own Immortal, Emma Cuzo and for also lending us her
      other Immortal, Henriette de Langeac.
      
      
      Duran [estancia] outside Buenos Aires, Argentina, July 9, 2008
      
      The estate was large and old enough that it had its own small
      cemetery -- and the man by the gates was almost as tall as Connor,
      very dark, in his mid-thirties, wearing a long expensive coat against
      the evening chill.  He looked competent, he was standing just
      *outside* Holy Ground, and he was an Immortal.  As Connor walked
      forward, the man stepped into the Highlander's path.
      
      "[Soy Pedro Vargas e Ysidro,]" he announced in the distinctive
      Argentine Spanish.  "[?Y vos?]"
      
      "I'm Connor MacLeod of the Clan MacLeod," Connor answered.
      
      Vargas switched to flawless English.  "MacLeod?  That is the name of
      the man responsible for this funeral today.  You must be the other
      Scotsman."  He scrutinized Connor closely.
      
      "Duncan MacLeod is my kinsman," Connor said.  Although the last thing
      he wanted now was a challenge, right outside Elena's house, he didn't
      feel he owed this vain, strutting peacock any further explanation.
      In fact, Vargas reminded Connor of another similar individual, Juan
      Sanchez Villa-Lobos Ramirez.  But Ramirez had been a *dangerous*
      vain, strutting peacock, and as Connor assessed the man before him
      with an experienced eye, he thought this Immortal might prove to be
      just as dangerous.
      
      "And your reason for coming here, MacLeod?"  Vargas' voice was soft,
      quiet.  The voice, Connor thought, of a man who had never needed to
      shout.
      
      "I'm here to offer my condolences to Elena Duran," he replied, his
      own voice low and even.  All right, so Vargas was being protective,
      maybe over-protective -- fair enough, under the circumstances.
      
      "Generally Mariaelena does not need protection from our kind," Vargas
      said, echoing Connor's thoughts.  "But at the moment she is
      particularly vulnerable.  She has spoken well of you, MacLeod.  I
      will therefore assume that you are not the kind of man who would take
      advantage of her moment of weakness."
      
      "I'm not," Connor said simply, pleased that Elena had "spoken well"
      of him but also annoyed that this arrogant Argentine was interceding
      between himself and Elena -- deciding whether he could pass.  But he
      said calmly, "Elena and I are friends.  I have no intention of
      hurting her."  Unless ... he thought to himself, making sure the
      thought didn't show on his face.
      
      "That's good, [escoces,] because if you try I will kill you," Vargas
      said quietly.
      
      Connor nodded, acknowledging Vargas' challenge, accepting the menace
      in the other man's smooth voice.  Vargas stepped aside, staying by
      the gate and letting Connor pass.  Connor felt uncomfortable having
      at his back an armed Immortal who'd just threatened his life.  But
      they were on Holy Ground, after all.
      
      However, Connor hadn't finished running the gauntlet to Elena Duran.
      As he looked beyond to the gravesite, another man, this one no
      Immortal, approached him.  "Senor MacLeod?  You do not remember me, I
      think.  I am Juan Onioco."
      
      Like many Immortals, Connor had a good memory for faces.  "I remember
      you, Onioco.  We met before, here at the [estancia]."
      
      "Yes.  I am her ranch foreman."  He took a deep breath.  "We know who
      you are, senor.  And what you are.  I must warn you...."
      
      Connor knew a threat when he heard it -- another threat, and this
      time from a mortal!  He turned his gaze from the gravesite to give
      his full attention to the Indian before him.
      
      Onioco's words seemed to die in his throat.  Fortyish, fully a dozen
      centimeters shorter than Connor, with jet black hair tied back in a
      ponytail, the man was clearly frightened -- and just as clearly
      determined.
      
      Connor took a step closer, whispering harshly down at the man, "Warn
      me?" and Onioco pulled back, but did not retreat.
      
      After a moment, he said, "Senor ... we will not allow you to harm the
      senorita."
      
      "I am not here to harm her, just to pay my respects," Connor said
      coolly, wondering if he was lying.  But he was angry to be threatened
      by a mortal.  And he also wondered if Elena knew what Onioco was
      doing.
      
      "I ... we ... are glad to hear it, senor."  And with that collective
      'we' Connor understood what he would be up against, the whole group
      of Indians who worked here and loved and were loyal to Elena Duran.
      Who did not care about Holy Ground.  Who knew how to kill Immortals.
      
      Connor looked at the foreman searchingly.  "Does Elena know about this?"
      
      Onioco shook his head, looking down.  Then, with some difficulty, he
      raised his eyes back to Connor's.  Connor could admire the man's
      loyalty, despite the threat to himself.  "She would be furious if she
      knew, Senor MacLeod."  Onioco turned to look at Elena, then back at
      Connor.  "But in any case, we will not let anything happen to her."
      
      Connor moved away from the foreman, resisting the impulse to look
      around him to count the number of Elena's Indians present.  His eyes
      were fixed on his destination, on Elena Duran.  She was ringed
      protectively by men and women in black, their faces grim or grieving,
      their voices low and murmuring; some of them watching Elena
      solicitously, like nurses around a sickbed, some of them watching
      him, warily.
      
      Before Connor could get close, one woman in the circle broke away and
      intercepted him.
      
      He wasn't surprised; he had expected to find her here.
      
      Standing by the grave, Elena had looked up when she sensed the
      Immortal approach.  Even at a funeral, [!Dios mio!] even at a funeral
      they won't leave me alone -- and she remembered that the first time
      she'd met Duncan MacLeod of the clan MacLeod had been at a funeral.
      The thought squeezed her heart, but those considerations had to be
      put aside, for now.  For now, there was this dangerous new Immortal
      to attend to.
      
      Elena looked around her and easily spotted him, walking slowly and
      gracefully toward the still-open grave, Pedro Vargas glaring at him
      from behind.  The Immortal had sandy hair, wide shoulders, was
      dressed elegantly and stylishly in black.  He wasn't even wearing his
      trademark trenchcoat and sneakers, she noticed absently.  Instead, he
      was wearing a formal greatcoat, dress shoes -- out of respect, she
      realized.  She was glad to see this man paid attention to such
      niceties.
      
      MacLeod.  The other MacLeod.  They wouldn't leave her alone either.
      
      Sighing, she started toward him, but Emma Cuzo held her back and
      said, "Let me talk to him."
      
      Connor watched Emma approach him: a young immortal, starkly
      attractive in a plain black pantsuit, no make-up, no jewelry, her
      feral red hair tamed back into a bun.  She walked toward Connor
      slowly, without any of the luxuriant menace of Vargas or the earnest
      aggression of Onioco, her glance darting from Connor, to Vargas --
      who watched both of them with a suspicious glare -- to the other
      mourners, and always back to Elena.  Emma's mouth frowning and her
      brow knitted, obviously thinking hard about what to do, what to say,
      when they were finally face to face.
      
      He made the decision for her.  "Emma," he said, and before an
      audience of potential enemies, clasped his youngest and latest
      student in a quick avuncular hug.
      
      Elena saw Connor hug Emma, and the Argentine closed her eyes,
      thinking she couldn't feel any more miserable, and yet here was Emma
      in the middle, between her and Connor.  And Elena had no doubt
      whatsoever which way Emma's loyalties would make her go.  This had to
      end -- it had to end, now, before any more blood was spilled.
      
      "Obi-wan," Emma said, and reciprocated his embrace with a cheeky kiss
      and a smile.  But her eyes were dark with worry.  "What a joy to see
      you."
      
      "Yes, I can see you're thrilled."
      
      "You came to pay your respects, right?  Stopped down from New York to
      drop off some flowers and a casserole?"  Emma's words were hopeful,
      but her voice was flat with dread.
      
      "It's a funeral.  Why else would I be here?"
      
      She raised one coppery eyebrow.  "That is the question, isn't it?"
      She was still smiling, sort of, her lips curved tight with tension.
      "When one considers that guys from the clan of Glenfinnan aren't
      especially popular with this crowd.  At least not right now."
      
      "You've always been a smart girl.  Capable of figuring things out."
      
      Emma had obviously been figuring things out from the moment he
      strolled through the cemetery gates.  He could see the conclusions
      written all over her anxious face.  "Connor," she pleaded, "she's
      grieving.  And there are people here who would line up to take your
      head.  Not all of them are Immortals," she added.
      
      "So I've been informed," he noted dryly.
      
      "It's dangerous for you to even be here.  Not, of course, that that
      has ever stopped you before ...."  Her voice trailed off with
      exasperation.  And beneath the exasperation, Connor heard a little
      fear.  She was worried, and not just for Elena.  She was worried for
      him.
      
      He was touched by her care, her concern.  At least, he thought, he
      had *one* friend here.  He wanted to reassure her.  For just a moment
      he cupped her chin in his hand, gently tilted her face up toward his.
      Feeling her skin, her flesh and bone, feeling that relief he always
      felt whenever he punched Duncan in the arm or gave the girl a hug, to
      feel that they were both still real, still alive, that the Game
      hadn't swallowed them up suddenly, when he wasn't looking.  "Hey," he
      said softly, "I'm not here to start a fight."
      
      "You're not?"
      
      Well, he also had to tell her the truth.  "No.  But I am here to find
      out what her intentions are.  Toward Duncan.  If she intends to
      avenge Stephen."
      
      "You think now is the time her ask her that?"
      
      "Better now than after she's taken Duncan's head."
      
      "And if her intentions are -- "  She stopped, unable to finish the
      sentence, to contemplate the question.  And he didn't answer her.
      Because they both already knew how it would then end.  "In Elena's
      mind, Stephen was her son," Emma protested desperately, her voice a
      hushed explosion.  "She's suffering."
      
      "So is Duncan.  I've been with him, talked to him.  Do you
      understand?  If she comes after him, I don't know if he will defend
      himself."
      
      Emma looked away.  "You know, I could just about kill Stephen for
      pulling this stunt.  Problem is," she observed wryly," he's already
      dead."
      
      Connor nodded in bleak agreement.  Elena and Duncan's
      fifteen-year-long love affair had braided all their lives together.
      Now Stephen's suicide mission would rip them apart.  "Emma, I have to
      talk to her.  Now.  I have to know."
      
      "Elena's my friend," she said softly.  "I always thought she was your
      friend, too."
      
      "She is.  But there are loyalties that transcend friendship."  He
      looked hard into his young protege's eyes, making his meaning clear.
      
      She held his gaze; she understood; she nodded.  And then she stepped
      aside, letting Connor finally make his way to Elena Duran.
      
      "Connor," she whispered, nodding her head.
      
      "Hello, Elena.  I'm sorry,"  he murmured, simply.  But he looked her
      over carefully.  He believed, he hoped, that she had been too busy
      dealing with Stephen's death and his funeral to contemplate revenge.
      Because the alternative was that she was using this time to plan it.
      And that after the funeral, she would be on a plane to Paris to take
      Duncan's head.
      
      Elena sarcastically began, "I'm sure you are."  Then she dropped the
      sarcasm and added, "Gracias."  She took a deep breath.  "Thank you
      for taking care of returning Stephen's ... for sending him back home
      to me."
      
      Connor nodded, acknowledging her thanks.
      
      He gazed at Elena, at the others around her.  Then he looked at the
      Immortal woman who had just walked up to take Elena's arm.  Blonde
      with shining dark eyes, the other Immortal managed to look alluring
      even in her funeral attire, and there was a scent about her --
      pheromones, he supposed -- so frankly sexual that Connor had to
      remind himself that he was here for a sad occasion, a tragedy.  This
      woman had to be Maria Feliz, the slut from his and Elena's
      conversation of a decade ago.
      
      "[?Y este es el otro escoces?]" she asked Elena, appraising Connor
      boldly, aggressively, sexually, raking him with her eyes, making him
      feel like he was on display.
      
      "Si," Elena answered.
      
      Dismissing the blonde with some difficulty, Connor turned his
      attention back to the Argentine.  Elena looked tired.  She was pale,
      the black eyepatch stark against her skin.  Her hair was tied back at
      the nape of her neck, and her long black skirt trailed along the
      ground.  And her hands  --  her hands were clasped in front of her so
      tightly he was sure they were hurting her. But she did not look
      defeated, not by any means.
      
      Elena murmured something to Maria Feliz and moved away with Connor.
      As they walked side by side, Connor said, "Duncan --"
      
      "It doesn't matter," she interrupted, slashing her hand through the
      air, cutting him off.
      
      "You know he loved that boy, too," Connor protested.  Even though
      Stephen Holz hated Duncan.  And tried to kill him.  And threatened to
      kill others.  "I've been with him, Elena.  I saw how he ... this was
      terrible for Duncan.  You must know -- "
      
      "Of course I know how he felt, Connor!" she said, with some heat,
      interrupting, stopping, turning to him.  "I've loved Duncan for
      fifteen years, since the first day I met him.  And I still do.  I
      know what he's like, what he went through, what he's going through
      now.  I know that he had no choice, that Stephen would have kept
      coming after him.  It doesn't change what happened, though, does it?
      What he did?"
      
      "No, but would you have preferred that Stephen killed Duncan?" Connor retorted.
      
      "I'd have preferred that they were both here and alive," she said
      then sighed.  "But that doesn't change the fact that Duncan and I are
      finished.  Maybe forever.  Forever for *us*," she added for emphasis.
      
      Connor could see her agitation, her grief.  He studied her, judging
      her, trying to figure out what she might do, which way she might go,
      as a result of Stephen's death.  He thought about other Immortal
      women, other Immortal "mothers" he'd known.  Henriette de Langeac.
      Hannah Swenson.  Both women he'd loved.  They'd never been able to
      forgive those who killed their "children."  Never.  And ultimately,
      they had both lost their lives because of it.  He didn't want Elena
      to die.  He definitely didn't want to kill her.  But for him, there
      was no choice between Elena's life and Duncan's life.  He would stop
      her if he had to.  Or die trying.  And perhaps, ultimately, he
      thought, it was the same parental instinct motivating them both.
      
      Connor had felt that instinct strongly in Paris, when he had finally
      reached Duncan at Darius' church.  They'd gone to the barge, Connor
      on edge and jittery all the while, warily sniffing the Immortal
      "ether" for any hint of an unfriendly presence -- and trying to hide
      it all from Duncan.  Once they'd reached the barge, Connor had sat at
      the small galley table, relaxing a little and drinking more whisky,
      while Duncan had paced the cabin, blaming himself for everything.
      
      /////
      
      (Paris, Duncan's barge
      
      Duncan's voice is trembling with emotion, with effort.  "He said --
      Stephen said -- he'd kill them all, take the head of every Immortal
      who lied to him.  Richie.  You.  Emma Cuzo.  Methos."
      
      "Duncan,..."  Connor shakes his head, not knowing what to say, how to
      make his kinsman -- his brother -- feel better.  But then he thinks
      about it for a moment.  Duncan has never been very successful at
      keeping secrets from Connor, and Connor can read between the lines.
      He closes his eyes, then opens them again.  "And Elena too, right?"
      he asks softly.  "Stephen threatened to take her head too, didn't he?"
      
      "No!" Duncan answers, but too quickly.
      
      Connor decides not to push it -- not this time, maybe later -- but
      Duncan continues.
      
      "He didn't know what he was saying.  He'd had a shock.  He didn't
      mean it, he was angry, confused...."
      
      Connor waits silently.  They both know Stephen Holz may have been
      shocked, angry, confused, but he had certainly tried to kill Duncan,
      just as he'd said he would.  And if he'd threatened others too....
      
      "He would never have hurt her," Duncan insists.
      
      Connor says nothing.
      
      "He wouldn't, Connor."
      
      Connor sighs heavily, running his hand over his face.  He needs a
      shave, needs some sleep, needs a new life.  He doesn't want to say
      what he's going to say.  He doesn't want to hurt Duncan any more.
      Still, he has to say it.  "But you thought he would.  Didn't you."
      It's not a question.
      
      Duncan shakes his head violently, his long hair whipping from side to
      side wildly.  "No!" he cries out, pacing the length of the cabin,
      then coming back to loom over Connor.  "No," he repeats, but the
      second time it's quieter, with less conviction.  Then he sits down at
      the table, lowers his head and takes a long, shuddering breath.
      "Yes."
      
      Connor shakes his head too.  Duncan always thinks the best of people,
      but he isn't stupid, and he's not a bad judge of character.  Which
      means the real reason he took Stephen Holz's head....  Connor says it
      out loud, for both of them, "And she'd never have believed it.  She
      trusted Stephen completely.  And he would have taken her by surprise;
      he would have taken her head."
      
      Duncan jumps to his feet, toppling his chair backwards.  He leans
      over and grabs Connor's shirt in his fists, jerking Connor to his
      feet.  "You must never tell her, Connor!  It would kill her, on top
      of everything else!"
      
      "Duncan..."
      
      "Promise me, Connor!"  Duncan scrunches up Connor's shirt and pulls
      harder, grief and now panic turning his handsome features into a
      grotesque mask.  "I want your word!"
      
      Connor ignores the physical assault and asks the question that's been
      burning his own guts out ever since Stephen's call.  "What if she
      comes after you, Duncan?"
      
      "I won't fight her."
      
      Connor growls softly, warningly, in the back of his throat, like an animal.
      
      Duncan lets go of Connor's shirt.  "But I won't let her kill me,
      either, Connor.  I'll go to Holy Ground."  He steps back then issues
      a warning, "Don't interfere between Elena and me."
      
      Connor has his own ideas about that, but before he can say anything,
      Duncan leans forward again.  "You can't tell her that Stephen was
      after her!  You can't!  I want your word on this!"
      
      "All right, Duncan," Connor says, taking Duncan's upper arms in his
      hands and pushing Duncan back, just a little, putting some space
      between them.  "I give you my word.")
      
      /////
      
      Argentina, Elena's Estancia
      
      But Connor MacLeod knew that if he had to, to save his kinsman's
      life, to keep Elena from coming after Duncan, he'd break his word to
      Duncan.  It was Connor's last resort, his ace in the hole, and he
      didn't want to use it, because he feared that it would kill her, just
      as Duncan had said it would.  But he would use it.  And if that
      didn't work, if he had to, he'd take her head.
      
      "I also know why you're here."  Elena leaned closer to him.  "You're
      worried for Duncan.  You want to know if I'll come after him.  You,
      too, are a MacLeod first, aren't you?  Everything else comes a far
      second."
      
      That's right, Elena, he thought.  I'm interfering -- I didn't give my
      word about *that*. But he didn't say it.  Christ, he thought, looking
      at Elena, seeing her pain, her despair.  Please, Elena, he wanted to
      say, don't make me --
      
      "Well, I know he had no choice," she said, answering Connor's silent
      plea.  "I don't blame him ... entirely.  I understand, I think, why
      he ... killed Stephen   and I won't be coming after him.  Now or
      later.  You have my word."  She paused, then added, "I hope that
      satisfies you -- this time."
      
      For the first time since he'd received Stephen's phone call, Connor
      could feel the chains around his throat slipping loose, the vision of
      Duncan's death, Elena's, perhaps his own, disappearing with these
      simple words.  He took a deep breath and replied, sincerely and with
      relief, "It does, Elena.  Your word has always been good."
      
      She nodded.  "Then your errand is done.  Now you can leave."
      
      She started to turn away, and, not wanting to be dismissed so
      abruptly, not wanting to go yet, he called out, "Elena!"  And because
      he didn't want to leave her like this, angry, hurt, bitter -- not at
      him -- it came out sharper, louder than he'd anticipated.  This got
      the Indians' attention, and Emma's, and everyone else's.  Connor was
      at the center of everyone's scrutiny -- again.  He moved closer to
      her.  "I didn't come just for that," he whispered for her ears alone.
      "I care ..." he began.  "I know what you're going through, how you
      feel...."
      
      She looked at him closely, knowing that he did know how she felt.
      She also realized he'd been about to say he cared about her.  Too
      honest, MacLeod? she wondered.  But at least he was sympathetic, even
      empathetic.  It surprised and pleased her a little.  Maybe more than
      a little.  At a time like this, one fiercely gathered one's friends
      around oneself.  Even if he wasn't quite a friend.  She considered,
      then said, "Would you like to stay, come back to the house
      afterwards?"
      
      "I'd like that very much," he answered.
      
      
      
      Translations: (all Spanish)
      estancia - Argentine combination ranch/farm
      y vos - and you
      escoces - Scotsman
      Dios mio - my God
      y este es el otro escoces - and this is the other Scotsman
      
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