Story Update: Kithe and Kin, Ch. 5, 1/4

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      Forging the Blade: Part II -- Kithe and Kin
      Chapter 5
      MacGeorge
      
      For acknowledgements and disclaimers, see Part 0.
      
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      Chapter 5
      
      Connor watched from a distance as Duncan began the long
      sword exercise again, weaving and thrusting the heavy
      claymore like it had no more weight than a child’s toy.
      Connor had never much cared for those muscle-cramping,
      exhaustion-inducing exercises, but they did build strength
      and endurance, and Duncan seemed to find them almost
      soothing, like the meditations Nagano had taught Connor in
      his travels to the East. Connor supposed it was a good
      thing, given that strength and endurance were currently
      Duncan’s best tools for survival. It would be decades before
      his student acquired the skills of a seasoned Immortal: a
      sophistication of technique that involved timing and speed,
      and reading your opponent so well that you could anticipate
      their every move. Both Ramirez and Nagano had been able to
      imbue Connor with that kind of awareness without him knowing
      even exactly how or when they did it. But their teaching
      skills were ancient and quite mysterious, while Duncan’s
      teacher was neither ancient nor mysterious, and his methods
      were of the more mundane variety.
      
      And that was part of their current problem. Duncan’s natural
      outgoing nature, so battered by years of abuse and despair,
      was at last reasserting itself, and it was making the
      prospect of another long winter in their isolated croft a
      kind of torture for them both. Duncan was now all too eager
      to wander out into the world where he would likely meet an
      untimely end. Or – almost as troubling – end their close
      kinship. For Ramirez had admonished Connor early in their
      relationship that once an Immortal had absorbed that first
      life-altering Quickening, he was no longer a student but a
      potential threat, a full-fledged competitor in the Game, and
      must be treated as such.
      
      Oh, they might remain friends, but their relationship would
      be forever altered and Duncan was not ready for that yet. He
      had much to learn yet about how to protect himself, not just
      in battle, but from unscrupulous men and women who would
      take advantage of Duncan’s trusting nature. But the tension
      between them had grown sharp and bitter over the last
      several weeks as winter grew near and they argued over
      whether it was time to abandon the croft and head south.
      Connor felt they should stay in the isolated safety of the
      croft, while Duncan had other ideas.
      
      Thus, after another exchange of sharp words the night
      before, the student had arisen before sunrise and was
      slashing and thrusting and parrying at invisible opponents,
      working off his frustrations. Connor left his student to his
      exertions, and after his usual morning chores headed for the
      horse pen to saddle his stallion. After a few minutes,
      Duncan appeared, leaning his forearms on the top rail of the
      pen. He had taken off his winter cloak as he had exercised,
      but now had it thrown over his shoulders even though his
      face was flushed and shiny with sweat.
      
      “So, you’re going,” he said, his breath making a small plume
      of mist in the chilly morning air.
      
      “Aye. I told you O’Brien was going to be in Aberdeen this
      month. It’s Huntly’s stronghold, and I owe Seamus at least
      an effort to get him free of the man’s clutches.” Connor
      looked up and met Duncan’s hostile eyes. “And no, you are
      not going with me. O’Brien writes there is someone asking
      around for me and if there is a challenge, you are better
      off here. You will only be a distraction for me to worry
      about. I’ll be back before the first snows.”
      
      Duncan looked away, off to the horizon for a moment. “I
      can’t say for certain I’ll be here when you get back,
      Connor.” Connor’s hands paused in his task and a wash of
      either fear or anger, perhaps both, tightened his skin. “If
      not, I’ll take the extra animals over to Sean MacDonald’s.
      He said he might be interested in buying them.”
      
      “Oh, they are yours to sell, are they?” Connor snapped.
      
      “No. They are yours. Everything is yours, Connor. Is that
      what you’re worried about? Well, dinna fash yourself, I’ll
      not take anything but my horse and my blade. Or do you think
      you own me, as well?”
      
      “No, but you’re my student! I am your teacher, and I, for
      one, take that very seriously.” Connor yanked on the girth
      and the stallion jerked his head and snorted in complaint.
      “Do you think you know all you need to know, then, lad? Do
      you think you can beat me, or any other Immortal? Do you
      care to try?” Connor pulled the katana out of its scabbard
      on the saddle and pushed the horse out of the way.
      
      But Duncan just stood, forearms resting on the fence,
      looking at him. “No, Connor. I know I can’t beat you. But
      you canno’ hide me away from any threat for the next century
      until I can, either. There are things to learn other than
      sword fighting, and I’ll hardly learn them here, will I? And
      I canno’ live forever on your charity. I must learn to make
      my own way in the world, Immortal Game or no.”
      
      Connor snorted and shook his head, turning to put his sword
      away. “You just want to find someone warm and willing for
      your bed!” he growled. “Well, get used to it. I once spent
      three years without a woman, and I lived.”
      
      Duncan laughed, his white teeth shining in the weak
      sunlight, and the tension between them eased a little. “Yes,
      but did you want to?”
      
      “You can’t make your life’s decisions based on the urges
      between your legs, Duncan,” Connor answered as he retrieved
      the stallion’s reins.
      
      “That’s nay what this is about, and you know it!”
      
      Connor clenched his jaw to contain his growing irritation as
      he put away his katana and tied down his saddlebags,
      checking one last time to make sure the water and provisions
      he had stored were secure. Then he led the horse out of the
      pen and closed the gate. He mounted, somehow feeling a
      little more secure on horseback, looking down at his
      student. Duncan wouldn’t leave, he reassured himself. This
      was all just a bluff to try to get Connor to take him to
      Aberdeen. Well, Duncan would learn that Connor MacLeod was
      not a man to be bluffed. “This is about you being so bloody
      cocksure of yourself that you think you are ready to take on
      another Immortal. Of you wanting to do it, isn’t it? You are
      a prideful fool, Duncan. A childish, prideful fool, and your
      very desire to leave is proof enough to me that you are far
      from ready.” He whirled away and kicked the stallion with a
      shout, urging him to a canter, forcing himself not to look
      back as he rode over the ridge and out of sight of the
      croft.
      
      His anger quickly evaporated and after a few minutes, he let
      the horse slow to a trot, cursing his clumsy tongue. It had
      not been that long since he had felt that wonder about what
      was just beyond the horizon. Indeed, that wanderlust had
      driven him across several continents, and called to him
      still.
      
      He was also painfully aware that just as Duncan had finally
      begun to get over all the hesitation and fear his banishment
      had caused, Connor had slapped him down once again. Ramirez
      and Nagano would be ashamed of him. Perhaps the person
      unready for the wider world was the teacher and not the
      student.
      
      He pressed his mount, wanting to get this trip over quickly.
      
      There were few real towns on the long route almost due east,
      and in four days he arrived, tired and dirty, to the twin
      rivers of Don and Din, now running along the joined villages
      called Aberdeen. The evening was gray and overcast, and the
      city’s granite buildings, which could sparkle like gems on a
      sunny day, all seemed heavy and squat.
      
      There were several inns near the waterfront where he was
      likely to find Seamus O’Brien and his ship, the Brigitte,
      but he thought it best, given his current tenuous
      relationship to the Lord whose lands dominated the area, to
      find an out of the way place closer to the edge of town.
      
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      The fresh morning air was tainted by the rank smell of tar
      and sweat and old fish, but despite the stench, the bustle
      and creak and sounds and smells of the busy harbor lifted
      Connor’s spirits and brought memories of happy months spent
      at sea. It had become a love of his, one not realized until
      well into his second lifetime – the freedom of riding the
      wind and the waves, the challenge of pitting his wits and
      strength against the vastness of mother nature rather than
      the petty meanness of human nature.
      
      One day he would own a ship, a fine three-masted caravel or
      brigantine fit to sail all the oceans of the earth, and he
      would travel across the world with no master but himself,
      and no foe but time and tide, wind and storm. He had been
      close to that goal until the call of Duncan’s burgeoning
      Immortal strength made him abandon his plans to find his own
      ship to transport the goods from the Far East, leaving the
      matter in the hands of Hamza Al Kahir, and ultimately,
      Seamus O’Brien.
      
      The reminder of his student hurried his steps. He needed to
      conclude his business here as quickly as possible, and get
      back to Glencoe and to Duncan. He would not lose the lad
      now. The young man had become far more than a student. He
      was a friend, the family he had lost when his village turned
      him out so long ago, giving him hope for the future and a
      sense of permanence that he had not even realized he had
      missed.
      
      He found a pile of crates stacked high and ready for loading
      and clambered up, seeking a higher viewpoint to examine the
      ships in port. The wind was a little fresher up high,
      blowing his hair away from his face, and chilling his
      cheeks. There were at least two dozen vessels rocking gently
      in the harbor’s gray waters, more than half of them
      round-bottomed local fishing vessels rigged with a couple of
      sails, their nets carefully gathered and tied to keep them
      from tangling. The pre-dawn catch had already been
      offloaded, and another wave of vessels would come in with
      the afternoon tide.
      
      But what interested Connor were the larger ships, of which
      there were eight, three of them snugged up against the dock,
      now being loaded or unloaded, the rest at anchor in the
      harbor, their masts rising like church crosses against the
      gray sky. Two were carracks, square-rigged on the fore and
      mainmasts, and lateen-rigged on the mizzen. Both ships were
      well-used, their paint beginning to fade and one had enough
      barnacles decorating her hull to dangerously slow her down,
      making her vulnerable to the pirates that that could dash
      out from shore and capture her before she got to open sea.
      
      Such lack of care irritated Connor’s personal sense of
      honor. A ship was like a living being. If you took care of
      her, she would take care of you and the men under your
      command.
      
      There were several brigantines of various sizes, probably
      bringing in goods from the Mediterranean, and a lovely
      three-masted caravel. It was large, almost 100 feet in
      length, with a brilliantly painted figurehead of a blondr,
      blue-eyed woman with braids trailing over her ample, but
      discreetly covered breasts. Connor couldn’t make out the
      name on her side from this distance, but he felt certain she
      was the Brigitte, named for Seamus O’Brien’s only daughter.
      
      Connor hopped down from the crates, a smile already forming
      on his face at the thought of being aboard a ship once more,
      and seeing his old friend and his daughter. Brigitte had
      been just a little girl in blond pigtails the last he had
      seen her, a sparkling-eyed child of obvious Viking decent
      who called him “Uncle Connor.” She had sailed with her da
      from the time her mother died when she was only six years
      old. No doubt she could haul up a mainmast with the best of
      them by now.
      
      He found someone to row him out to the Brigitte, and hailed
      the ship once she was within calling range. A moment later,
      Seamus O’Brien’s bald head could be seen at the side.
      
      “Is that you, Connor MacLeod?” he shouted. “Well I’ll be.
      Come aboard, ye old pirate! Brigitte! Come see who’s come to
      visit!”
      
      He had barely managed to heave himself aboard when he was
      tackled by a flurry of blue skirts and blonde hair, and
      found himself flat on his back on the hard deck.
      
      “Connor!” Brigitte shouted right in his face. “I canna
      believe it! By Jesus, Mary and St. Joseph, you are a sight
      for sore eyes. Did you get Da’s letter? Did that ugly man
      ever find you? Are you going to sail with us?”
      
      Connor took her shoulders to push her away and stand, trying
      to decide which question to attempt to answer first. The
      child was…well, she was certainly no longer a child. Near as
      tall as her da, she was broad of shoulder and her figure had
      certainly filled out, almost matching the somewhat idealized
      version of the ship’s figurehead. But before he could open
      his mouth to explain his presence, she wound her arms around
      his waist and looked up into his face with a huge grin. “I
      just can’t believe it,” she sighed, hugging him tightly.
      “You are exactly as I remember. I always told Da that you’d
      come back someday and marry me, and he teased me and teased
      me about it, but here you are!”
      
      “Uh...,” Connor’s mind suddenly blanked, and he carefully
      peeled her arms from around his waist. “Brigitte, I’m
      delighted to see you, too. Always loved you… like a
      daughter, ever since you were little,” he added quickly.
      
      Brigitte laughed aloud. It was the big, hearty laugh of
      someone who had never felt the constraining hand of
      society’s view of the way a ‘lady’ was supposed to act.
      “Well, I’m no’ little anymore, Connor MacLeod.” She rose up
      on tiptoe and gave him a hard kiss on the mouth. “And I
      decided long ago that you would be the man for me!”
      
      Connor cast a desperate glance at Seamus, who just rolled
      his eyes and made a poor showing at trying to hide a grin.
      “Well,” Connor said loudly, desperately casting about for
      some way to change the subject. “This is certainly a fine
      ship, Seamus. Have you found a good cargo?” He managed to
      disengage from Brigitte and move towards his old friend, who
      led him down through a narrow passageway and into the
      captain’s cramped, but serviceable quarters.
      
      “Well, that depends,” Seamus answered. “On whether I am
      prepared to do as Lord Huntly demands. First, he tells me I
      have to come here to deal with business, then dictates what
      cargo I’m to carry, then he charges outrageous harbor fees.
      The man’s impossible!”
      
      “Well, he’s hardly on my list of good friends, either,
      Seamus. That’s why I came, to see if, together, we could
      wrest the Brigitte from the bastard’s clutches.”
      
      “He might as well own her at this point,” Seamus replied,
      heaving himself into a chair with a sigh and restlessly
      stroking his shaggy, gray beard. “I’m hardly a captain of my
      own ship anymore.”
      
      “Well, I may have the means to remedy that,” Connor
      answered, finding a chair for himself. “I have some funds I
      can use to buy out the lien.”
      
      “Would that it were that simple, my friend. Huntly is not
      interested in having the lien bought out, and has found all
      kinds of reasons to refuse my efforts to pay it off. He
      wants my ship, and I think I know why.” Seamus leaned over
      to a small cupboard and pulled out a jug and a couple of
      glasses. “But at least I’ve found one benefit of dealing
      with his Lordship. Would you care for a sample of some of my
      latest cargo?”
      
      “That stuff’ll shrivel your brain,” Brigitte remonstrated,
      plunking a tray of wine and bread down on the table. “Or
      other, even more valuable parts,” she added with a glint in
      her eye, elbowing Connor.
      
      Despite himself, Connor felt his face get hot with what was
      a rare, but brilliant flush of embarrassment. Brigitte’s
      sudden ascension to womanhood, along with her aggressive
      sexuality, was very disconcerting. He couldn’t bring himself
      to think of her as anything but a child, and, well, the very
      thought of…his mind refused to go there.
      
      He gulped down a mouthful of the grog Seamus had poured, and
      coughed, his eyes watering from the fumes as the strong, raw
      liquor burned down his throat into his stomach. “Well,” he
      said, then had to clear his throat and cough again when his
      voice came out strangely choked and high. “We’ll have to
      find some way to persuade the good Earl that letting you out
      of the lien is in his own best interests.”
      
      “We could slit his throat,” Brigitte offered helpfully,
      perching on the edge of the nearby cot.
      
      Connor assumed she was joking, but Seamus glared at her.
      “None of that, now, girl! You’ll just get me into more
      trouble!” Seamus leaned closer to Connor, the fumes from the
      grog already thick on his breath. “She’s a good girl, but
      sometimes she gets a little… enthusiastic, if you know what
      I mean.” Seamus winked one eye slowly, and Connor nodded,
      even though he wasn’t at all sure he wanted to know what
      Seamus meant. He took another swallow of his drink, choking
      it down. Already he could feel the warmth spreading through
      his body, although he supposed he should worry when, after
      the second cup, he noticed his fingertips going slightly
      numb.
      
      
      Cont. in Part 2
      
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